Final Film Rough Cut - Lucy Clark Re-Sit

When editing our film we made a rough cut which we showed to various friends and family to get feed back. The comments that we recieved from our classmates included:

"Consider where the titles are positioned"

"Name and title layout should not be above each other"

"Cut the scream out at the end because it makes the film feel more like a trailer than a film opening"

Comments from friends and family were:

"What are the photographs there for and what significance do they have?"

"Good production logo"

"The voiceover and camera angles make you want to know what happens next"

"The title doesn't need to come up at the end of the film as well as the beginning"

These comments will help us when we go to edit our final draft of the film because we have the opinions of the people who are our target audience. The ways in which we will change our film to comply with these comments are as follows; we will get rid of the scream and the titles at the end of the film to make it seem more like a film opening than a trailer; we will reconsider the positioning of the titles to have the most impact on the audience; we will try and make it more obvious why the photographs are being used.